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Prologue
History of earth has changed in the course of thousands of years. Some say it was created by god and others believe that it was the center of the universe. As millenniums passed, the use of technology was used to calculate how the earth formed. As time goes on, mankind will figure out more mysterious questions such as the creation of matter. But as many people don't know of about the existence of another planet also inhabited by mankind and living creatures. In the second eon, as life was beginning to arise the heat of the sun got intense and burning and life itself crumpled;but it was not lost.
At around 1 billion years ago, a massive asteroid shuck earth and released a major chunk of its parts. The asteroid hovered in the asteroid belt for a few million years until being suddenly released from the asteroid belt. It landed near the nearest star alpha century. Its distance from it gave it an overall temperature at 117 degree Fahrenheit. It gave it an oppurtunity to have life on it. As the eras and eons passed strange life sprung there similar to earth life. As time passed another predatory animal appeared. Humans. These humans were different from homosapiens on earth. The had giant fingers with sharp nails and big ears like elves. They also had a level of intellenges a bit less than ours.They made homes predicted weather and hunted. But as todays humans technology was not improved. They also had a special gift. They had the capability to use full human brain. They could send shockwaves,fire, and confuse. It was like magic!So heres my story a kid of a FastSpeed tribe. My story will uncover more about this planet.
History of earth has changed in the course of thousands of years. Some say it was created by god and others believe that it was the center of the universe. As millenniums passed, the use of technology was used to calculate how the earth formed. As time goes on, mankind will figure out more mysterious questions such as the creation of matter. But as many people don't know of about the existence of another planet also inhabited by mankind and living creatures. In the second eon, as life was beginning to arise the heat of the sun got intense and burning and life itself crumpled;but it was not lost.
At around 1 billion years ago, a massive asteroid shuck earth and released a major chunk of its parts. The asteroid hovered in the asteroid belt for a few million years until being suddenly released from the asteroid belt. It landed near the nearest star alpha century. Its distance from it gave it an overall temperature at 117 degree Fahrenheit. It gave it an oppurtunity to have life on it. As the eras and eons passed strange life sprung there similar to earth life. As time passed another predatory animal appeared. Humans. These humans were different from homosapiens on earth. The had giant fingers with sharp nails and big ears like elves. They also had a level of intellenges a bit less than ours.They made homes predicted weather and hunted. But as todays humans technology was not improved. They also had a special gift. They had the capability to use full human brain. They could send shockwaves,fire, and confuse. It was like magic!So heres my story a kid of a FastSpeed tribe. My story will uncover more about this planet.
